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Mother
Contributed by
wlamom
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:11:31 AM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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God saw she was getting tired, and a cure was not to be.
So he put his arms around her and whispered “Come with me.”
With tearful eyes we watched her suffer, and saw her fade away.
Although we loved her dearly we could not make her stay.
A golden heart stopped beating, hard working hands put to rest.
God broke my heart to prove to me he only takes the best.
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Re: Mother
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 02:01:36 AM AEST (User
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I can relate to your sorrow, for I have a relative with lupus. It si so sad to see her suffer all the years. My heart goes out to you, and may GOD comfort you. |
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Re: Mother
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:47:09 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful and tender... I am sorry for your loss.... I know how it feels...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Mother
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:38:07 PM AEST (User
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Extremely beautiful write! I loved this!! Such a sad topic but you found beauty in it, great write! I'm so sorry for your loss, don't lose writing, keep it up.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Mother
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:24:15 PM AEST (User
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such a tender and loving write, sent a shiver down my spine when I read it, thanks for reading and commenting on my latest poem
takecare
Pix xx |
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