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past
Contributed by
bebe20071
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:09:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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eyes clouded by tears
heart beating fast from fears
always watching their back
unable to relaxe
they are not always the same
always changing their name
moving from place to place
running away from a different face
being judged because of the past
unable to move on for the best
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Re: past
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by poet70 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:29:37 AM AEST
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What is in their past they are running from? Are they in trouble, what are they running from, I wonder, other then that it is a great poem, hope to hear more .
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Re: past
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by sensible_paper on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 04:46:46 AM AEST
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I love the short and sweet of it, and the fact that it leaves mystery to think about and to fill in what is going on.
I really enjoyed it
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