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Elapsed Thoughts
Contributed by
Crimson_Valley
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:55:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You値l be the one I値l always love,
Cherished deep inside my heart.
My white silken beautiful dove,
The perfect sculpted piece of art.
You値l be the one I値l always care for,
A person to help carry my burdens.
A loved human being like before,
Lighting a world that never darkens.
I値l be there over at your house soon,
I知 erasing my bitter life before you.
Felt to stare into the deep blue lagoon,
I壇 jump in the water and you I壇 rescue.
A driven love with no designated place,
Laugh until my face permanently stays.
Until the universe has run out of space,
I壇 always have a face to look and gaze.
This was meant to be and last forever,
Pure and magical as freshly spun gold.
To me you値l always stay as the better,
Without you I値l be lonely and cold.
My warmth, my comfort as was before,
One who I will always love and adore.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Crimson_Valley
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2005-05-11 21:55:35]
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Re: Elapsed Thoughts
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:54:08 PM AEST
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you write with the same style as I do, so this read very well to me :) I thought this poem was great, nice job...
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Re: Elapsed Thoughts
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:57:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful Poem
I hope things get better for you
Good imagery
Nice Write
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Re: Elapsed Thoughts
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:31:12 PM AEST
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beautifully written, genuine and heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Elapsed Thoughts
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by lovestruck on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:16:56 PM AEST
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hey i love this poem its so amazing!
-taylor |
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