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colorful death
Contributed by
jtkzlimz
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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beep
blood is all i see as i raise then knife to take my life.
beep
blue is how i feel as i take all of theses pills
beep
brown dirt ontop my cascate as they put me in the ground
beep
red roses to say goodbye fake tears is what they cry
beep
blue brown red awful words that they have said
beep
im the reason im dead but really theyre to blame
beep
its all the same no way to say goodbye i remain to be unseen
beep
please let me die you know it was suicide
beep
hit the switch turn off the machine
beep beep beep beeeeeeep
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2005-05-11 21:05:21]
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Re: colorful death
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by FearMyRawr on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:44:17 PM AEST
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| I really like the "beep" part, it just ties everything together. I've been there. Very well written piece, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: colorful death
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:48:06 PM AEST
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| interesting jtk. i see my life in colours....only makes sense death has a colour too |
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Re: colorful death
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:20:21 PM AEST
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| nicely written my friend is going through the same thing right now |
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