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Oreo
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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There're angels
yet they're few
I have one
In my rural area
though with no wings
she's a dove in the air
oreo
the homer of our time
marching! marching!! to the sky
there the dawn begins
just like the earth warm to the soil
down to earth
Ho! her comments,my tonic to ailment
how could he earth had been without nature
how are the rivers without gurgle
a pock body with no clothe
birds do nest on trees not on tea trees
oreo the name displays its foliage
thy existence strengthen the weak
in the land of weed
oreo harvest her onions
conceptualization father of the mind
synopis the summary of all
oreo
feel your purse
mouth piece the volume of words
oreo the homer of our time
olasunkanmi
kanmmy2@yahoo.com
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olasunkanmi
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2002-12-29 16:00:00]
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Re: Oreo
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by OreO on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:32:05 PM AEST
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Awwww olasunkanmi this is sooo sweet of you to write for me ...i had no idea i was your mentor...this poem made me smile so big ....i love this poem and it's so pretty the way you put the visions into it....i thank you my beautiful friend for thinking of me in this way and writing me this beautiful poem i will keep it forever....this brought tears to my eyes and touched me deeply my friend...thank you...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Oreo
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:13:23 PM AEST
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| thanks for doing that for Oreo, she truly is a beautiful someone, God's still working on her wings, so she's going to be here for awhile |
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Re: Oreo
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 07:49:28 PM AEST
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| OREO deserved this beautiful write about her,a true angel indeed! A good friend to have Thank goodness we got her! Good words here & a beautiful thought! Christina |
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Re: Oreo
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 08:40:49 PM AEST
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| Oreo is everyone's mentor isn't she?? and rightly so... :D... I really liked how you wrote this olasunkanmi.... keep it up!! |
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