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Cloud Number Nine
Contributed by
Urizen
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:34:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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And I'm sitting on my cloud number nine,
Just watching the world, float, drift on by,
I'm just sitting watching my friends,
Quickly passing me by.
I'm holding my hand out to someone,
There's no-one here I know,
And they stare at the hole in the wall,
While I get ready to go.
The situation redefines the style,
A distance, refrain based upon your smile,
And slowly the pain pours from my soul,
Why does this heart feel so cold?
I hate the phrases and the lines,
My enchanted spider-like head indicates decline,
And I'm sitting on my cloud number nine,
Just waiting for my time to arrive.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-05-11 18:34:55]
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Re: Cloud Number Nine
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:12:50 PM AEST
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Well, if I read this poem right (I hope), you are sitting and waiting to meet the right person in life? Just keep sitting on that fluffy cloud while it floats around and one day, suddenly, it will bump into the right cloud and two clouds will become one. Sounds corny, I know, but that is as good analogy as any, lol
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Re: Cloud Number Nine
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by Moon_Kitten05_07 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:25:03 AM AEST
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that was really good
~ ellen ~ |
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