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Kitty
Contributed by
kami
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:15:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Washing, purring, sleeping
The frisky kitten
Enthusiastically
Scrambled and slipped
On the waxed floor
Into the glass door
Copyright ©
kami
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2005-05-11 18:15:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Kitty
(User Rating: 1 ) by dreamer_for_eternity on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:20:32 PM AEST (User
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That's really cute!! It's short but it's good that way, gives you a laugh and brightens your mood a little! The imagery of the cat slipping against the door is really cute and funny! Good job!!! |
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Re: Kitty
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:20:27 AM AEST (User
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awww! very cute and sweet |
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Re: Kitty
(User Rating: 1 ) by xofireangel27 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:57:03 PM AEST (User
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great job!, i could just see my cat doing this, well now that i think about it, i think he has! lol desribes kittens in a very short simple sweet way. great job, keep up the good work.
-Kelly- |
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