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let me die
Contributed by
emokid
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:59:15 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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WHat more can I say
I'm sorry I hurt you this way
and yes It's happened more than once,
but you've done it as well.
These calls really need to stop.
Let me die
let me go to h*ll
this what I deserve
I can't love you anymore
We'll just end up takeing our lives
Your photographs are already burned
our memories are ashes
So today I burried our love
and myself please forgive me
"dearly beloved we gathered here today
to mourn the loss of a love so young and fresh..."
Let this die
It's easier if you pretend I'm dead
Copyright ©
emokid
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2005-05-11 17:59:15]
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Re: let me die
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:02:39 PM AEST
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eh...The poem was good, but kinda seemed a little harsh..tho I did like it...good job
~Clark |
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Re: let me die
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by orangemen566 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 07:49:21 PM AEST
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| that is really a good poem, but actually do you want to die? don't let your life end up like that, believe me, you have more to live for..good poem |
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Re: let me die
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by Fears on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:16:27 PM AEST
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"Let this die
It's easier if you pretend I'm dead"
depressing... |
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