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On Your Own
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:56:07 PM in AEST
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Lady, take your time
‘Cause I’ll be here
And I’ll be waiting for you
All you’ve got to do
Is let me know
Maybe you will find
That what you fear
Is only baiting you to
Turn away from me
You don’t have to go
Just let me hold you once again
And if this really needs to end
Then I will let you go
‘Cause I already know
Some things, you must learn on your own
I know you believe
That you should leave
And I won’t stop you now, but
Won’t you wait until
The morning’s come
Stay with me tonight
And I will write
The music of our lives
Until my fingers bleed
And become numb
Just let me hold you once again
And if this really needs to end
Then I will let you go
‘Cause I already know
Some things, you must learn on your own
If you should go
Then you should know
You’ll take a part of me inside you
Take a part of me to guide you
Hopefully it leads you home again
Just let me hold you one more time
Remember those nights that you were mine
Then I will let you go
‘Cause I already know
Some things, you must learn on your own
Lady, take your time
‘Cause I’ll be here
And I’ll be waiting …
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Re: On Your Own
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by emokid on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:01:28 PM AEST
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| I could see being done by the used but (standing O) well done dude |
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Re: On Your Own
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 07:06:26 PM AEST
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Naz,
It probably would work. It seems like such a coincidence that you would mention Neil Diamond, as he is a favorite with both my wife and I. In fact, just this evening, we were contemplating going to his concert in Madison, WI, this summer.
Another creative work of art (music) my friend
Will, Terry |
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Re: On Your Own
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 07:31:05 PM AEST
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OF COURSE you know I love this, right??? A divine proclaimation of devoted love and acceptance... knowing that you might have to let her go one day, yet you are embracing this fact, and giving her room to spread her wings... The adoration is truly felt in these shimmering images and expressions you have woven... As always, an exquisite masterpiece from the one and only Nazmythian. Standing ovation, dear friend. Gorgeous melody, written and sung by a beguiling voice. Merci beaucoup for sharing this breath-taking tale with us, Scotty. Love it love it love it!! *Hugs* Flawless. Sentimental. Simply heart-warming. All my love, cheri ami. Forever,
Your petite fleur,
Stephy! |
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Re: On Your Own
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:50:17 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful. I must be older than you. Neil could do it beautifully, but if John Denver was around I think he could hit hit gold fast with it. There is so much love and care and tenderness here. Beautiful.
Rita |
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Re: On Your Own
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:18:28 PM AEST
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Awww sweet and beautiful Nazzy.
awsome write once again. |
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Re: On Your Own
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:47:14 AM AEST
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Wow! Poet, song writer and wooer of hearts!?
(is that a word?)
Is there anything you can't write about?
Awsome job buddy!! |
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Re: On Your Own
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:38:37 PM AEST
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Yessir, that's nice, very nice. Full of all the stuff hearts are made of. Lovely write, Scott.
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