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a rose
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:43:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A rose of love, in a garden of hate
witch is true, this simple fate
how come you love tis fool
you are so much better than this
you are smart and have a pure heart
you deserve somone to love all
of who you are
A rose of love, in a garden of hate
Gave to you way more than you gave back
you take so much from those you say you love
only to brake them into peices
you are a disease to the meaning of love
a rose of love, in a garden of hate
true love came but it was too late
for the rose in the garden of hate
for so long simply ran out of love
a rose of love in a garden of love
came to me from heaven abouve
saved me from my pain
and danced with me in the rain
nperry2004
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Re: a rose
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:55:35 PM AEST
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Okay..first off...asking for comments is lame, I liked this poem tho..don't get me wronge..but asking/begging you shouldnt need to do..have faith in your writes..
Now to the poem...I really loved the first three stanzas...the last one seemed very different and out of place...I thought the first three were very powerful and would have led to a different ending, but still the poem is very good..And I loved the use of repition..tho it was over used once...other then that..Its amazing..Good luck..and I hope to read some more of your work soon
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Re: a rose
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:44:40 PM AEST
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To the point of passion & no return! It spoke loud & clear about more hate than love that was near!! Take a chance & dance,& with the rose of love I hope you truely do find all of your romance!!! A pretty poem worth the read,
so to find the answers you might need!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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