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never gonna get it
Contributed by
emokid
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She said I would
never get it right
I was an accident
I was pathetic
I was useless
she said I would
never get it right
never going to get it
never get it right
never going to get it
My dad said
He never raised
a worthless son
who's never going to
do anything
I'm a waste of clay
he said I'm
never get it right
never going to get it
never get it right
never going to get it
Well I'm on my own
I don't need you
You're worhtless to me
just like the dust you'll be
so remember one thing
you'll never be like me
Copyright ©
emokid
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2005-05-11 17:30:15]
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Re: never gonna get it
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:33:21 PM AEST
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Huh...lol..this reminds me of alot of my very firsts writes..I like that...But I have grown as a writer..And I hope to see you do too, because I really like this poem...
The last stanza is very good might I add..
~Clark |
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Re: never gonna get it
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:45:48 PM AEST
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i used to have someone in my life who said the same things now she is my biggest fan... i think they say it to make you prove them wrong...
good job |
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Re: never gonna get it
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by Aluminum on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 11:02:39 PM AEST
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i love the ending man...
great work |
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