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Twilight
Contributed by
dark_descent
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:39:31 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Trapped inside my own dark mind
I'm lost and cannot cope
When I feel left behind
You are my only hope
Lighting up my darkening sky
Twilight do not dwindle
Although the clouds rise dark and high
The light we can rekindle
Your pale soft illumination
Glows and bathes my skin
Scarred with crimson illustration
One cut for every sin
I never appreciated your light
Until it was too late
I've draped myself in perpetual night
To hide from my true fate
Your soft radiance fills my soul
You set my mind at ease
Without you I cannot feel whole
And the darkness will not cease
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dark_descent
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2005-05-11 16:39:31]
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Re: Twilight
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:50:44 PM AEST
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Yet anther very powerful write...The third stanza was the best part, and the ending was great too, very well written piece of art ...Amazing job, as what I have come to expect from you.
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Re: Twilight
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:43:06 PM AEST
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The third stanza caught my eye too, really liked it. Very well written piece.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Twilight
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:07:07 PM AEST
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| great write....i actually liked the 4th stanza the most - lol maybe it just rings true for me somehow. |
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Re: Twilight
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:48:43 PM AEST
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A very graceful and lyrical piece, very well done indeed. The emotion expressed is very touching.
Write on.
Andrew |
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