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Open Eyed Dozer

Contributed by tiggytom on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:07:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don’t know why my brain is wet
Unable to speak - feeling so weak
Dots flying around the crowded space
Can’t determine where I am
Shouldn’t have done it
Should’ve been a man

In the corner of the room is a warm dry place
Thinking too much - so much more then I’m supposed to

Exploding vessels in the safety of my skull
One fifty blood cells turned quickly into none
Flying home I missed the wind
Knowing only I was home when my vision twinned

Letting me see my child’s future on the last of my flight
Obeying quickly what he’s told
Showing respect for the older spirit with wisdom on his breath

Open eyed grown up choising to feel youthful
Lied to by myself - why should I be truthful
I’m reaching for the star to carry me on
Floating on the edge of sign
Looking for redemption
Swerving clear of temptation
Live in my life - long time going to collect my short comings

Copyright Â© tiggytom ... [ 2005-05-11 16:07:02]
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Re: Open Eyed Dozer (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:56:16 AM AEST
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Very deep.

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