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Solipsistic
Contributed by
heartquake
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:29:29 PM in AEST
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so if you don't know what solipsistic is, and are gonna post a negative comment on this poem, please look it the word up first... I'm atheist not solipsistic, but its just a poem, look at it like a poem... I put it in 'dark poetry' because if i were really religious i'd find this pretty dark... but all comments, good or bad are welcome.... enjoy...
You can't spell belief, with out a lie
And all life's hardships, I do defy
My whole life's story, Its not a book
Its written in stone, take a look
The end's not coming, its already here
It was the beginning, I thought it was clear
Its not Genesis, its not Revelations
Its just the fear, Its intimidation
It's not a theory, its the truth
Its not creation, its the proof
That only I, can be real
I'm not a god, he's an ideal
You can test me, you can’t quit
I'm addiction, I'm your habit
Call me flawless, because I'm perfect
In a world of fear, I'm the suspect
Your infected, I have the cure
I'm the medicine, And I am yours
I come with an if, a side effect
Painless death, as you'd expect
The Bible was wrong, I am precise
Adam was weak, an apple sufficed
A simple fruit, turned deadly decoy
Just like me, please enjoy
Copyright ©
heartquake
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Re: Solipsistic
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:08:44 PM AEST
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I like this poem alot...youe oppinion is just as equal as every one elses, so people that get mad over your thoughts and beliefs can just be mad and deal with it...Im athiest/agnostic myself...Well done poetry
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Re: Solipsistic
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by emokid on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:47:05 PM AEST
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| good idea not as dark as I would like but that's me. Anyways, If you do think this then read the lyrics to Atreyu's "At least I know I'm a sinner" ok later bhuy bye |
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Re: Solipsistic
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:29:56 PM AEST
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I found nothing offensive about this write it was flawless in its content and nicely done we all have different beliefs thats what makes the world go around and all of us human
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Re: Solipsistic
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:46:40 PM AEST
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You, like everyone else on this site, are entitled to their opinions. We may not all agree with each other, but we have our own individual needs and beliefs. I found this poem to be excellent in all areas. You are extremely talented.
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Re: Solipsistic
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:46:12 AM AEST
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This is devine i'm in tottal agreement . . .
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Re: Solipsistic
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by sride686 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:49:34 AM AEST
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| Not as dark as you made it sound and it was a good write. I have my views and beliefs but I’m not going to put your down or tear your poem apart because of them. You have voiced your thoughts and feelings so well and for that I thank you. Take care and keep up the good writes. If theirs nothing out their for you and know God then what’s at the end when you die? If the answer is nothing or I don’t know then doesn’t that scare you? Just some thoughts you can respond if you’d like. I’m sorry it took so long for me to read your work things have been crazy over here in Iraq. Hit me up again a let me know which one of your writes I should read. Take care always….Steve |
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