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Promises
Contributed by
somedaylove
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:17:49 PM in AEST
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Some are made and never kept
others were made to close a deal
There are ones made as a bribe
and the ones that just wasn't real
Some of them just couldn't be
while others just were forgotten
There are people that mean them
and yes, some that just lie
But the ones made from the heart
are the strongest you will see
they will stand up to anything
to outlast the test of time
So have trust and faith in me darlin
as you hear the words i speak
for they come from deep down
within my heart and soul
I promise to always do my best
to give you a lifetime of happiness
with all my love and passion
so you can look back with no regrets
Copyright ©
somedaylove
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2005-05-11 14:17:49]
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Re: Promises
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by heartquake on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:48:02 PM AEST
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| "I promise to always do my best to give you a lifetime of happiness with all my love and passion so you can look back with no regrets"... thats just what a liar would say!!! HAHA, I see through you!!.... j/k lol.... i understand it was sincere... but i just thought why not make sometrouble for a lil bit... anywho... good write, I've been lied to a lot my self but i know there are some genuine people out there, its all in the sifting process... but being as gullible as I am at times, doesn't make it easier... but good write and keep up the good work |
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Re: Promises
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 03:12:13 PM AEST
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Yes, there are some very fine, honorable people out there. Yet the ones that just play at love or life are the ones that make others fearful. It is sad to me that someone would play with another's heart. This is a great write.
Smiles,
Rita |
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