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My heart is my cage
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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my mind is the weather
stormy and cold
stay warm in your arms
cause i cannot hold...
i can't stand this despair
it's the hand i can't touch
i reach into black
while not hearing much
she's so far away
i catch echo fade
there's nothing i do
but rot here in wait..
i'm made of the rain
i melt off the cube
no strength to be whole
she makes me so blue
i wanna be free
from the chains of my loss
my head is so heavy
so is this cross...
i'm tortured by words
her soft spoken voice
my heart is a cage
i have not a choice
i take a small pill
to forget what is real
my time to be blind
is the time that i steal...
bury me in an hourglass please...
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Re: My heart is my cage
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by sride686 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:34:35 PM AEST
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No one commented so I thought I’d take a look and it was as good as the rest. Well not as good as some of your more resent stuff but it was good. You have a great style and I know I always say that but its true. Hope things are going well haven’t heard from you in a few days. I really liked the 3rd stanza but the whole thing was a strong write. Take care my friend and I look forward to more rights as I know more are coming….Steve
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Re: My heart is my cage
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by Alina on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:58:10 PM AEST
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You are by far the BEST POET I have read in this site in a long while!! ALL of your works never cease to amaze me!! You are truly talented and gifted with words! Please keep the wonderful and heart touching writes coming my way! Im looking forward to more!
ALINA
Your last line made this poem all more the better and mysterious! |
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