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Don't Wake Me
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:51:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Outside the glass, nature says goodnight
The evening sun smiles it's final gold
Upon the dancing colors of the many blooms
As if in celebration of the Mother's success
Lengthening gray splahes wrap those within
The few stray beams highlight you for my eyes
A silent breath's rise reveals delicate firm
The exhale almost disappointing for it's release
In these long shadows of newborn night
The hollow angry of the day is lost
No longer borne in this boundless longing
Our hearts now thirst for more than we had
Dark embers of sultry form those expectant eyes
Within a face that makes artists sigh
A smile that can be felt as well as seen
This portrait of beauty forever etched in my heart
Take me to your well completely
Let me drink until I am whole
Share with me all that you are, sweetly
Nourish the weakness that is my body, my soul
No, never in the total of my existence
Has a light shone as bright in my world
I fall, hoping this dream is to be forever
As the whole of your love now surrounds me
Coming, for the moment, to each other
Sharing the heat of pure and natural desire
In adoring pleasure, our sole thought now
To worship at the carnal altar that is only us
A fervid glow erupts in our besotted minds
With the gentle touches that explore and press
Tender, soft lips knowing the hidden recesses
The sheen of passion enjoyed, now exposed
Deftly, willingly, joined in loving acceptance
Glazed eyes roam the other's features
While we respond to that inner urgency
In a final gasp, we surrender, aware
Amazed and awed by this languid vision
Lying with this pitious wreckage of life
Wishing ever, if I could choose the where and when
Surely, I would die in your arms, tonight.
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reprobate
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2005-05-11 09:51:49]
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Re: Don't Wake Me
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:35:37 PM AEST
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I hope your dream comes through for you as for all those wishing for love. Keep dreaming, Michael. Miracles do happen.
Peace
Dove |
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Re: Don't Wake Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 06:58:28 AM AEST
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This was so very beautiful, it friggen made me cry. Doesn't take much these days. You are an awesome writer...a soul toucher.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Don't Wake Me
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 12:57:12 AM AEST
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michael, you absolutely blew me away with this
sheer masterpiece, truly beautiful! written in exquisite
style and flowing so sweetly and gently across the page...
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