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A tear
Contributed by
Moon_kitten05_07
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:44:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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a girl,
blonde hair
pale skin
Blue eyes
Closes her eyelids
slowly
tenderly
someberly
And single tear drops
clear
soft
spherical
It rolls dow her pale check
little by little
gently
unwillingly
the tear glides to the tip oh her faint jawbone, and then drops to the ground
cold
hard
rough
others will never know everything within this tear
hurt
anger
distrust
everything within this tear will never go away or be forgotten
fear
sadness
confusion
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2005-05-11 09:44:49]
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Re: A tear
(User Rating: 1 )
by alexb on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:47:42 AM AEST
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| i love the way this poem was written. it has really great structure. really unique. great write. |
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Re: A tear
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:01:01 AM AEST
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soft with a sharp edge. I like it
jen |
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