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one last sunset
Contributed by
saha
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:09:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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See me here
Taking my last breath
Making last step
Bleeding, forsaking all I have
Theater of light
One last sunset of mine
Close my eyes
Giving up, fight the need
To scream
Overcome by dream
Theater of light
One last sunset of mine.
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saha
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2005-05-11 09:09:56]
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Re: one last sunset
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by EverlastingDawn on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:33:23 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem
Written well
Nice Write
~Dawn |
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Re: one last sunset
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by alexb on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:44:54 AM AEST
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| hey, killswitch engage is freaking awesome!.......oh yeah......nice poem, too. |
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Re: one last sunset
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by crap_snapper on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:23:03 AM AEST
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| I really do like your poems and this one is no exception. |
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