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Dreams
Contributed by
sinned
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:25:42 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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Tall grass a fild of dreams
Dazies and Browneyed Susans
Puffy clouds float a sky so blue
Sinned
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sinned
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2005-05-11 06:25:42]
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Re: Dreams
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:14:34 AM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
One of the most spectatular of all Haikus that I ever read.
So much emotion and feeling and so little words......you have captured the real Haiku....a very fine art!
Wonderful
Warm love
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Re: Dreams
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by poet70 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:47:31 PM AEST
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The beauty of this poem is amazing, thanks, I needed this, I am learning to write haiku, and so when I come across a great one like this is really helps me to see how it is down. I want to be a poet of many talants, never to get into a rut of doing the same kind.
Tammi...... Thanks again for the beauty of this one.
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Re: Dreams
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:15:24 PM AEST
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Yes Dennis indeed, - a delightful Haiky again. You are the Master of Haikus.
I have to devote some time to concentrate on Haikus. Always eager to tell a story, - and there are so great riches in a couple of short lines.
Can you send me your Blessingagain Dennis, I lost it and miss it soo!
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It's hard to live without your blessing.
no matter how beautiful the Haiku be!
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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