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Karma
Contributed by
Chris_Mahoney
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:18:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Toxins spilling from your eyes, contaminating my soul,
Burning my flesh, deceitful truths, eyes as black as coal.
Hands of ice freezing my heart, you demolished our feeling,
Fruitless smiles with an ill-fated destiny, I am not healing.
Your shadow is like a black hole. It consumes life from around you,
There’s not many who live to tell the tale, but I can vow it’s true.
I survived the inseparable parting, now I lie on a bed of frosted snow,
My hands and heart have slowly awakened, I thought I’d let you know.
Darkness falls upon your colourful life, taking back what you stole,
You will now feel the aching, you will have nobody that will console.
Now when he looks at you, you can feel your heart freezing within,
“poor you” what does it feel like? Are his toxins burning your skin?
Karma is a serious thing, you’ll see that you’ve made a mistake.
When it came around, the first time I mean, do you remember that ache?
I wish I could say I hated you, but a love like that doesn’t fade,
You lost love, threatened my heart, I bet you wish you’d stayed!
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Chris_Mahoney
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2005-05-11 06:18:40]
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Re: Karma
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by Artur_Drygalski on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:27:27 AM AEST
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I Liked it Chris, although not my favourite topic...never had someone cheat on me and then dump me... but, I liked your expressions and i can see thi is full of true feeling, although the feeling might be happy that she is suffering, and also rage and anger.
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Re: Karma
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 07:06:43 AM AEST
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A man can do
He can look and drool
He can ask will you
It's okey until his woman do
Whats good for the gander is good for the goose
We are creatures sexual too
Man and woman mistakes they do
Love is accepting the total you
Forgiveness is the golden rule.
I can fel your anger ,but get over it.
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