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i dON
Contributed by
naveen
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:22:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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yOU DON'T KNOW WHY
I don't know why
our hearts know
so why there's a dark sere
thats fills us apart
I wanna avoid
but its shows
your love for me
so strong so serene
that fills my life's void
Looking for your comments
Naveen
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naveen
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2005-05-11 04:22:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: i dON
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 08:53:42 AM AEST (User
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Liked this, its nice and simple and conveys your thoughts very well. |
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Re: i dON
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 07:05:17 PM AEST (User
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Very nice poem...
God Bless! |
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