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Abide Firefly Right On By
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:52:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I thank you for the reason
Step on down that same side steet
Flash of lightning beneath me
I take off and burn it to the beat
I fly away with deception
Give the sky a wink and try to stay alive
Jump around with some purpose
Break the chains of rules to which we will never abide
Crack a hole in my head
I reach down and give my soul a kiss
Let the time fly with no worries
No worries with the smoke upon my lips
Turn around and then I see you
Flash a smile with intentions so innocent
Stuck with a purpose
And wondering of seeming malicious intent
Walk around the street light
Firefly flies on by
Reach down to my soul
Grab life by the bow tie
Fireworks in my brain tonight
Sit around and chase the breeze
All the doors to life unlocked
No need for a mess of keys
Hole in the wall
Then I come right back inside
Stuck alone with an emptiness
And back again to the rules, by wihich we shall abide
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Exodus
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Re: Abide Firefly Right On By
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:41:10 AM AEST
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WOW!
I have never read anything like this!
This is Unreal!
It feels random, yet just like a knot of blood vessels, these words connect and create networks with one another.
"Flash of lightning beneath me"
"Give the sky a wink "
Illogical yet strangely appealing.
Perhaps within symbolical context?
"Crack a hole in my head
I reach down and give my soul a kiss"
Riddle me, riddle me not!
I love it!
Contradicting yet ...OUTRAGEOUS!
"Grab life by the bow tie"
I am completely dumbfounded by your ingeniousness.
I am so impressed.
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Re: Abide Firefly Right On By
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by Kyarn on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:47:20 AM AEST
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| This is really good. Wonderful job. I like it alot. |
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Re: Abide Firefly Right On By
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:38:50 AM AEST
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ditto, Im stumfinded with this remarkable write.
Thank God for folks like u.
I've often wondered how u guys do it but life by the bow tie says it all.
A masterpeice to all that walk the beat.
huggs,
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