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NOTHINGNESS
Contributed by
kydistortion69
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:41:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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NOTHINGNESS SWALLOWS THE BLINDING LIGHT OF LOST INNOCENCE-
DEVOURING THE VERY ESSENCE OF TIMES PAST, FUTURE, AND FORGOTTEN-
FEEDING ON THE WASTED LIFE OF EXPEIREMENTS OF TOTAL BLISS-
ABSORBED INTO NIGHT ETERNAL NO LONGER TO BE TANGABLE OR BECKONED-
LIFEFORCES SWALLOWED WITHOUT A THOUGHT JUST MOMENTS OF TAKING-
LEAVING AN ABYSS OF CHAOS TO BE MOURNED FOREVER A DREAM-
RIPPED FROM BEING NO LONGER IN THE MAKING-
THE RIPPLED WAVES OF A DARK AND NUMBING FORCE YET UNSEEN-
OH SWEET NOTHINGNESS THAT VELVET TOUCH OF ICY FILLED GRIP-
CONJURING ALL ENERGY FROM THE LIGHT AND ENDING THIS MADMAN'S TRIP.
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Re: NOTHINGNESS
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:48:37 AM AEST
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ohhh this is a GREAT poem! you've captivated me with complete awe. just magnificent write, beautiful use of words and i love the imagery
this is kindof disturbing but deeply thought provoking
o well done |
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Re: NOTHINGNESS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:52:50 AM AEST
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Most thought provoking!
It is difficult to grasp the notion of ‘nothingness’, itself.
As it is beyond human comprehension.
I feel this piece was convoluted and clinical, in regards to style and sequence.
I particularly connected to both the following lines:
“LEAVING AN ABYSS OF CHAOS TO BE MOURNED FOREVER A DREAM”
“ABSORBED INTO NIGHT ETERNAL NO LONGER TO BE TANGIBLE OR BECKONED”
Perplexing, deep and obscure.
Loving your writes.
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Re: NOTHINGNESS
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:25:54 AM AEST
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truely amazing. very truthfull. dark.
... but i wouldn't call this disturbing though.
it's good.
i like this. |
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