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I Am The Hangman
Contributed by
Nos_Bunny
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:56:20 PM in AEST
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It was'nt meant to be this way, My life lost in pain,
I love you more than anything, But the past drives me insane,
I need you now more than ever, Until death do us part,
But slowly my minds currupting me, And tearing my heart apart,
My angel, My baby, My eternal flame,
Why can't my thoughts just stay the same,
My soul, My heart, My future wife,
Why can't I be with you all my life,
If I loose you now, Death has won my love,
Now angel understand i'm from below not above,
I want to let go, Please set me free,
I am now the hangman, Hanging from your tree.
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Re: I Am The Hangman
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by Jimmato on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:05:51 AM AEST
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nice.
I like the change to My angel etc.
If you can edit it, get rid of the And in And tearing my heart apart and maybe change if I loose you now to lose. |
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Re: I Am The Hangman
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:17:22 AM AEST
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| I think this is a good poem but kind of sad.. |
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Re: I Am The Hangman
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:38:18 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: I Am The Hangman
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:52:20 AM AEST
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wow, this is heavy stuff but i really liked it and i loved reading it. every line grabbed me and i was hanging onto every word. this is a brilliant, original poem.
good job i must say |
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Re: I Am The Hangman
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by bear on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:06:13 AM AEST
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| It was a very good write. I like the last line. |
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Re: I Am The Hangman
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by ruthy on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:52:08 PM AEST
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| dont ever let go marcus....dont ever.... |
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