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I Find Her Nevermore
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:26:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sittiing lonely by the door,
my shadow casted on the floor
and all my soul within me churning
with a yearning to outpour
all the sadness and the sorrow,
wishing vainly for the 'morrow
when suddenly I thought to borrow
all our memories of before...
So without a grin or smile,
all the while...all the while
like a footstep in a mile,
I though of what this thought was for...
what and why this painful thought
had jus' occured to me before.
So collecting all my senses
and in all of my defenses
(careful not in false pretenses)
I found her face and thought some more...
But the tears within me streaming
had, while I continued dreaming
of a life that once was teeming
of the happiness we bore,
brought me yet one more reminder
of a life that once was kinder...
I only wish again to find her
and scent the perfume that she wore...
But fate has dealt a different hand
and like a tiny grain of sand,
I search for her in all the land
but still I find her nevermore.
M.O.H.
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Man_On_High
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Re: I Find Her Nevermore
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:51:05 PM AEST
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| Wow this was an incredibally beautifull poem, thank you so much for sharing this beautifull piece of art. SLipSiX. |
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Re: I Find Her Nevermore
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Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:49:51 AM AEST
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Incredible, heartfelt write!!! I love it
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Re: I Find Her Nevermore
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:42:11 PM AEST
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How very Edgar Allan Poeish of you! : ) A piece to be
proud of for sure, Billy. Simply divine. Sweet, yet sad.
Lovely, yet forlorn. Such brilliant emotion! And exquisite
writing, from one of my very favourite poets!
~Breezy
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Re: I Find Her Nevermore
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 06:46:56 PM AEST
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hey bro...i've read this more than once but thought i should leave a quick comment now...not sure why i havent already...
anyway, i thought this was geat..and of course, quite poesque...(more precisely, "ravenesque"), which is said not to deny this of its own originality, but to simply point out the greatness of it. this write can certainly content with the best of the best!!
nice write!
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