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I HURT
Contributed by
spazz911
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:53:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hurt
don't you dare ask why
I just am feeling the pain
the suffocating trail
I hurt
my heart is just aching
I am stting here and no one cares
another carbon unit on this rock of earth
I hurt
frozen in this thing callled pain
alone in my vainty
edging near insanity
I hurt
falling swiftly with no cause
no single threat within
but stil such massive pain Im in
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spazz911
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2005-05-10 20:53:27]
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Re: I HURT
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:49:14 AM AEST
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my heart is just aching
I am stting here and no one cares
ur so wrong... i care, im yer frend of course i care and so do many many others. im here fer u no matter what u think.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: I HURT
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:36:37 PM AEST
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| A beautifully heartbreaking poem. Nice work... |
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Re: I HURT
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by EsotericWsdm4 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:33:00 AM AEST
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| Embrace the pain. The danger begins when you become numb. |
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