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The light
Contributed by
marc
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There's a single light at the end of a room growing brighter with every flash. Expressionless faces walking passed you, away from the light. Why are these "faceless" people walking away from something so beautiful so pure? You keep walking, not being able tpo turn back, you don't want to..your mind wants to see the light. yuo begin to become frightened as the light begins to fade, and darkness begins to surround you. You scream, but you hear nothing; no sound, no echo. Finally it's pitch black. Now you don't know which way you are going;could be towards where the light was...could be where you came from. You keep screaming but there's still no sound. Now you are scared.......to death. After your gone the come back, stronger then before. It seems like it's been so long, but it's all happened in a flash, and now you are one of the expressionless faces, trying to worn the next about the light that feeds on human suffering.
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marc
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2002-12-29 09:30:00]
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Re: The light
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 08:17:21 PM AEST
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Hmmmm this was confusing... was it about hell? Thats all I can think of.
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Re: The light
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:02:12 PM AEST
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Wow......how deep is this....this is beautiful marc.....im very impressed with this write i enjoyed it alot...thank you for sharing this one i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
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