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An Ode to an Ass
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:35:55 PM in AEST
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What's the view like from up there?
In your castle in the air
In your fortress in the sky
Tell me just what greets your eye
Can you see the tears you've wrought?
Find each dream that died for naught?
At your cold, merciless hand
What's your take from where you stand?
What's it like to be so great?
All we mortals to berate
We dare not to see your face
Such embodiment of grace
Surely it would cause our death
Still the heart and stop the breath
Of those fools who choose to be
Simple humans just like me.
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:41:14 PM AEST
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i know a lot of people like that, it is really saddening that there are so many of them, but hey, we "mortals" will overthrow them in the end
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by Kyarn on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:41:25 PM AEST
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Love it! Sarcastic *and* really well written!
Wonderful!
~Kyarn |
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:01:50 PM AEST
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Wow!!
*Shaking here* lol
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:07:58 PM AEST
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An ass is an ass, he has no class, but you will never prove to him he is an ass. But when the universe turns and he finally learns, it will be his ass that burns.
I love this!
Peace,
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:45:29 PM AEST
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great write larry just ignore them your 2 good 4 that and so is your poetry, bar keep a double 4 my friend 2 night make it strong . . .
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:11:06 PM AEST
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*applauds*
Damn, Larry.... I wish I could do something productive (like this) with aggrevation/anger. This is great... fabulously human --- which, of course, is intended as a compliment.
Well done!
~Snemmy~
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:09:11 AM AEST
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Cool poem , very original and fun!
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:58:08 AM AEST
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Larry this was brilliant mate. I agree with Snemmy, this was just real and honest indeed human.
Great writing as always.
Jane~ |
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:31:13 AM AEST
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| Definately awesome. A pleasure to read. It sounds just like someone I know |
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:20:04 PM AEST
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So Larry, when did you meet my ex-husband?
LOL! Great write! Unfortunately there are too many people like that out there...it's a shame.
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:30:38 AM AEST
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i knew i would love this when i saw it, the wrath of larry hehe, ...dont worry my friend, when they fall off their pedestal they will find its a long way down, big hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:27:41 PM AEST
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Amazing astounding awesome.
Roses for you sir for this
Love Angelxx |
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:01:26 PM AEST
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Yup yup, I know this tale very well, This poem on the other hand, is very good and is a pleasure to reads too, again
~Clark |
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 05:25:50 PM AEST
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Great mock on those who would think..they are-
Great write.
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Re: An Ode to an Ass
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 07:26:45 PM AEST
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funny ... you know how I always think everything is about me lol ? when I saw the title I almost died .. I fled one site and ran to another and someone caught me and said I had a big ass ... rotflmao .. so I thought maybe you were doing an ode to it .. one may always hope .. I'd love an ode to my ass! especially by the rakerman .. whohoo! lol! But they saw the wrong picture .. my ass isn't big .. but I am an ass.. anyway; don't know what this is about .. but it's good.
mary z |
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