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The Thirst
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:04:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Always there...
Upon lids,
As eyes are closed away
from light.
The color red.
Upon a ravens wing,
fluttering in the
heartless night.
The smell, burns
sweat.
It chokes me...
Takes away my senses.
I fear that I may...
lose control of myself.
And as daylight falls
It does not cool with
bitter night,
but swells!
I see veins...
Pulsing.
CRAVINGS...
It burns...
dillusion,
misdirection...
Upon my eye,
my vision swerves.
God help me...
Help
Me
Deny
THE
THIRST!
DNB
Copyright ©
ForeverAndADay
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2005-05-10 20:04:46]
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Re: The Thirst
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:24:35 PM AEST
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| Hey, Wow I love this...! One my friends.. has this feeling lol... but anyways, this is a wonderful write... I loved it all, and very much enjoyed reading is!! Well VERY VERY GREAT WRITE!!!!! |
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Re: The Thirst
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:37:39 PM AEST
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i agreee it has a...feeling, its a great poem, keep it up
kc |
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Re: The Thirst
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:50:47 PM AEST
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Its Perfect....I Love It..
Very nice..keep it up
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: The Thirst
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by EsotericWsdm4 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 01:35:24 AM AEST
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| What happens when you lose control? |
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