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Goose Bump Blues
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:18:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I got the low down blues
Looks like they sunk again
The midnight train signaling
Look like I’m gone again
The next stop Tuscan
The desert comes within view
I got them dry heat blues again
A sand castle for a home
Down comes red rain again
The blue sun within reach
The sand glistening
The wind whispering
I got these cool breeze blues
My heart is fluttering
Same emotions again
The first step stuttering
The saxophone notes
In a distance they wail
I got these goose bump blues again
Chasin’ my own lost tail
I can see the green river again
Its current unmistakable
I got the tear drop blues again
Feelin’ down this way
Not much a person can say
The bluest blue of all these rays
I got the blues today
Feelin’ down this way
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2005-05-10 19:18:18]
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Re: Goose Bump Blues
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:26:59 PM AEST
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chills...felt like i was there..
brighter days ahead..Awesome poem
Keep up the Great writes
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Goose Bump Blues
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:50:14 PM AEST
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This actually sounds like song lyrics. Colorful ones at that. You could sing this on Beale Street in Memphis and be a hit! As a song, I like it.
Dove |
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