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The Lonelyness of a Flower
Contributed by
marc
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a lonely flower
rising above the rest
shinning with individuality
being put to the test
being judged
by set standards
expected to meet them
but inside there's only failures
it looks around
empty valley in it's eyes
then it sees another
another as it cries
the flower's watered
being refreashed for free
by the tears of another
another lonely
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2002-12-29 08:30:00]
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Re: The Lonelyness of a Flower
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:18:46 AM AEST
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| what a sweet touching write, thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed this |
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Re: The Lonelyness of a Flower
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by Killer on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:03:34 AM AEST
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| Awsome write...keep up the great work. |
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Re: The Lonelyness of a Flower
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:50:21 PM AEST
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This is soooo deeply written i enjoyed this one alot, i've never really thought about the lonelyness of a flower but you have it written out so beautifully here my friend....it looks around empty valley in it's e yes then it sees another .....another as it cries...that is so sad....i love this poem thank you for sharing your beautiful writings...
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