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Within Me
Contributed by
dark_descent
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Despite the cruel distance between you and I
I won't let our passion just smoulder then die
For deep down inside me there dwells a great fire
Kindled by true love, not only desire
It scorches me, tortues me, no love without pain
Insatiable furnace driving me insane
Engulfing the darkness, the undying flame
Ensuring my feelings will still stay the same
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2005-05-10 17:35:55]
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Re: Within Me
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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I Love this Poem...My favorite of all of yours..Because I am going through this right now...Amazing write and something I truly relate to....
*True love knows no bounds, and does not fade with distance*
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Re: Within Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:58:04 PM AEST
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"True love knows no bounds, and does not fade with distance"
F--- you man, just F--- you.
Excellent poem though!
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Re: Within Me
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:27:26 PM AEST
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What a simple, sweet , and so to the point poem! I love this and even can relate...though I can't go into it. Absence really does make the heart grow fonder: if your heart is in it at all! Great write! I enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Within Me
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by Kyarn on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:45:26 PM AEST
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This was written very well. I really like it alot. I can relate...
(Completely off topic, but your screen name is cool too)
Anyway, relly good poem. |
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Re: Within Me
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by white_tiger on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:56:21 PM AEST
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i really liked tha poem becasue it had such great imagery and though it was really short, the message was so clear.
great work
huggs and keep smiling
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Re: Within Me
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:35:03 PM AEST
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I wish you the best. Very well written.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Within Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:53:16 PM AEST
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You spoke very true when you identify true love as more than only desire. A complex thing it is. Well penned, and good luck!
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