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Hard Love
Contributed by
Northernrick
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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One second she's great
the next she's bad
she leads u on
it makes u mad.
It gets ruff
you hold it in,
you try to make it never end.
You care so much that you would die
even if she said good bye,
you keep on loving
you hold real strong
but she's not there to help you go along
You’re all alone
she's stuck in your head
You think about her so much
you wish u where dead
Any girl reminds you of the past
you can’t move on
you wish you could have made it last
She is gone
you’re still there
waiting for her to care
Copyright ©
Northernrick
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2005-05-10 17:32:06]
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Re: Hard Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:08:30 PM AEST
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Simply wonderful...
It's amazing the things you realize
when you lose someone you love...
Hard but true ,its learning to let go..
Maybe your writing will ease your pain...
Lookin forward to more poems from you..
Great work ~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: Hard Love
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:42:49 AM AEST
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This is very sad and deep. I loved it. You have talent, keep writing.
xoxo
--amanda-- |
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