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Covet
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:28:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Don’t you feel eyes moving over your body?
Undressing you, slowly, relishing your flesh?
Don’t you feel invisible hands fondling you,
Tantalizing caresses all over?
Desire the things you cannot have,
Risk everything for one night of pleasure,
Let your lust lead the way,
To unimaginable worlds of darkness…
Savor the juices of the taboo fruit,
Bittersweet nectar, sinful gratification,
Satisfy your yearning, bite into the apple…
What would his body look like if I bled him dry?
How would his cries sound if I tortured him?
Rising stimulation, morbid addictions re-awaken,
Thoughts of blood and sex, crimson fantasies,
Coveting… wanting… needing…
YOU…
Unbearable, this longing, this hunger,
I mentally touch you, feel you…
With shuddering sighs of bliss, I consume you,
My forbidden apple of flesh and blood…
Your eyes, singed with burning desire,
Reflecting my obscure image, staring back,
Wishing for a way to have you,
Writhing, dying under my touch…
A world of malevolence and beauty,
Where you no longer need to keep your cravings confined,
And every filthy fantasy comes true…
The deepest sanctums of my corrupted mind…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-05-10 15:28:18]
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Re: Covet
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:02:59 PM AEST
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| truly a dark poem and a very well done one at that, this is true we all desire the forbidden fruts of the flesh (some not in our darkes sanctume ether...) your choice of words was amazing and the style was inventively used witht he structure and the subjest matter was shocking but all this made it very good, do keep up the good work. Be well |
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Re: Covet
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:09:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful panting of the sub concience a poetic journey in2 the realm of freudian artistry . . .
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Re: Covet
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:00:07 PM AEST
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"Thoughts of blood and sex, crimson fantasies,"
My friend said that blood and sex should
never be used in the same sentenced and I
must say that I agree with him. Anyway, this
was a treat of a poem beautifully written and
tantalizingly dark. I loved it all and I was
dragged into this poem kicking and
screaming while the imagery was branded
into my head. Thanks for sharing this I will
comment on your other poems later.
Bobo (Joel)
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