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She's my cold wound
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:03:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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a ghost of a lamb
my heart in her hand
keep her warm coat
just keep me afloat
lighthouses flicker
heart does beat quicker
i can't find her there
through hazy fog air
i fly through the storm
before i'm forlorn
i see her on land
i descend in her hand
see.. it's this girl that i know
and...my love just can't show
glass...she shatters to me shards
i'll fold...cause i hold no pairs of cards
she's my cold wound...
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Re: She's my cold wound
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:37:59 PM AEST
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| wonderfully written....your style is quite unique...refreshing... |
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Re: She's my cold wound
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:39:10 PM AEST
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Interesting poem
Nice use of rhyming
Good Write
~Dawn |
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Re: She's my cold wound
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:33:51 AM AEST
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| What to say about this write? Its another very unique write that is well written with a strong stroke of your pin. You write the type of poetry I love to read, loss and Dark. You write about these things all to well and sometimes I wonder if everything in your life is okay. Take care my friend and I look forward to more of your writes….Steve |
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