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Deaths Embrace
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 02:32:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Death a sweet embrace
Holds you tight loves you needs you
But you never wake.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-05-10 14:32:04]
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:44:54 PM AEST
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Wow pix, I'm not one who likes haiku's too much but this one was good. It said what it needed to in such few words!(hence haiku style)
Well done!~joni~ |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:11:15 PM AEST
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*Humm* this was good (I too am not a fan of Haiku poems ether but the title just interested me.)
its short style would explane why it feels like it needs more to be said (but thats probably just me) this wsa an interesting read and well done to, do keep it up (and I think I might start to like Haiku poems *chuckls*). Be well |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:15:33 PM AEST
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i was just wondering where u were and i scroll down and there u r as always a masterpeice of poetry that speaks in it's own poetic tounge glad u r posting . . .
((((((pix))))) Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:28:48 AM AEST
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| Pix this write is so awesome I’m never much for small writes like this but it left me breathless in so few words. This is death at its best and so well put. Keep up the good writes and take care….Steve |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:21:26 PM AEST
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That was so hot!
I loved that poem,
short sweet, and beautiful.
Good write hun.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by Archie on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:41:32 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of a movie. "Meet Joe Black" one of my favorite movies. |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:51:24 AM AEST
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Excellant. I loved this.
Great job.
Christina |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:36:47 AM AEST
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true.... hugs n' love, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Deaths Embrace
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:07:37 AM AEST
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| Its true ..one never wakes up when one is embraced by death..that is very sweet and final to all..hugs n love pixie:-) venkat |
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