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Sunset
Contributed by
Dying_angel
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:21:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There was a real sunset tonight
All pink, orange and red
It was such a beautiful sight
Powerful enough to wake the dead
Well almost, were you awake?
Did you see the sky?
The sparkling lake?
From where you lie?
Tonight was a night to live
A night to forget sin
To forgive
A night I wish you were in...
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Dying_angel
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2005-05-10 13:21:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sunset
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:36:15 PM AEST (User
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wow, the imagery was very, very dreamy. I could almost see the sunset, i think now i'll look to it more often. Keep up the good writing!
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