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My grave is my door
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:17:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Curse my bad luck
no rabbit foot stuck
nothing is shining
shoe dull bad timing
damn all the clouds
shout silent sounds
i wanna be gone
the green from the lawn
take all my bones
my sticks and my stones
i've no power to flee
when apes disagree
trapped in a cube
four walls become you
this mind of no more
thinks death is my door...
...to a better life.
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In_a_While
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2005-05-10 13:17:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My grave is my door
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dying_Angel on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:23:05 PM AEST (User
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Definately dark...really really good...and weird...:D Jenxx |
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Re: My grave is my door
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alina on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:51:17 PM AEST (User
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GREAT and WONDERFUL poem! I really didnt get it until the last two lines. The last two lines made it everything it is.
ALINA |
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Re: My grave is my door
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylady on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:17:04 AM AEST (User
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nice poem. last door will be the coffin .. |
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Re: My grave is my door
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:11:57 AM AEST (User
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Yet another very different write by one of my favorite authors. Your writes are so nice to read because there are none like them on the site. Very dark and very deep and was a great read. Take care my friend and keep up the good writes….Steve |
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