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The Bee
Contributed by
Moon_Kitten05_07
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:10:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Buzz Buzz Buzz
Happily flying free
then you take a splash with in my hot tea
Buzz Buzz Buzz
Happily swimming free
Bugs can't swim you silly silly
Buzz Buzz Buzz
Happliy jumping high
jump out of my teacup before you die!
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily drying off
oh,are you sick, i heard a little cough?
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily sneezing hard
i should promptly send you a get well card.
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily trying to fly
it seens as i you're to sick to , no matter how hard you try.
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily zigzagging abou t
on watch out for that wall, you'll be down for the count.
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily lying on the floor
wacth out for people coming in that big door.
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily need my aid
i'm here to help, dont dare be afraid.
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily resting in my hand
another sting from you, i'm not able to stand.
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happilu getting weel
flying away home, but be as quiet as a bell
Buzz Buzz Buzz
happily flying free
Flying somewhere eles , and please watch out for my tea!
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Moon_Kitten05_07
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2005-05-10 10:10:56]
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Re: The Bee
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by crap_snapper on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:08:46 AM AEST
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| At first when i was reading i thought the narrator was happily just watching this bee dying and the description made him sound cruel and a little sadistic but my opinion obviously changed at the end, i liked that allot. Nice mood and a nice little story told in an interesting way. |
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Re: The Bee
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by declinefoale on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 11:16:43 AM AEST
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| Bee's P!ss me off you should have squashed the little bugger! Funny poem though it was sweet. |
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