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I wish
Contributed by
Baby_Grl
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:34:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I wish I was happy,
Not feeling down,
Feeling so Crappy.
I hate it when I barely got a life,
I wish some day I was someones wife.
I wish I wasnt sad,
I think of the fun memories I had.
I hate it when I know I wont be someones wife,
So I can have a better life.
I wish I wasnt alive,
Cause I hate to cry.
Cries of saddness,
Cries of pain,
I cant take any more pain.
I wish I was happy,
Not feeling down,
Or feeling so crappy.
I hate my life,
I wish to say to my guy,
Yes I will be his wife.
Cause my guy is the one,
I will always have fun.
His name is Justin.
A guy I will always put my trust in.
Atleast I do now.
I love you Justin Agbay
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Re: I wish
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by crap_snapper on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:55:00 AM AEST
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i quite liked your poem, i don't know why you want to be with someone that bad, i think most people feel like that when there young but it gets easier
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Re: I wish
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:18:51 PM AEST
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| After having read your journal entry, I have to agree intellectually with crap_snapper. But love is not always an intellectual process. Without the "benefit" of the journal, this poem reads like a true unrequited love poem. and I can relate to that, having been there more than once. I do like your poem and I hope eventually time can heal your hurt and you can move on. |
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Re: I wish
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by psycopath on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:53:16 PM AEST
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| hun i want u to be my wife cause i love u so much |
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