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When I see you.
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:00:22 AM in AEST
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When I see you come in to my room.
I want to run to the bathroom.
Cause I saw you before in my classroom.
I dream once of you begin my bridegroom.
Then I saw you again in my darkroom.
I thought of sweeping you away with my broom.
But I knew that wouldnt work.
When I see you in my storeroom. I Want to run .. And hide in my bathroom..
When I see you in the lunchroom I run..
Then when I see you again... It was in my bedroom.
Then I found out it was someone I saw in the courtroom.
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Re: When I see you.
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by crap_snapper on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:15:32 AM AEST
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| when u say it's something u just thought of i wonder how long it took you because i like this poem alot, first one of yours i've read but i'm going to read alot more :) |
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Re: When I see you.
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:42:57 PM AEST
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| :-) nice write dear....lot and lots of rooms in there...butterflies too... |
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Re: When I see you.
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:31:50 AM AEST
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| well written i enjoyed it |
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Re: When I see you.
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:36:10 AM AEST
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I know this is a nice poem. but i get 35 people to read my poem, and no one else leaves me a comment but 2 people! come on lol if you are going to read my poem. then plzzzzzzzzzz leave me a comment!!!
THANKS BUTTERFLYGIRL40 |
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Re: When I see you.
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:35:16 PM AEST
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Woah... this one is scary to me... very scary. (A person experience I have had) If you have gone through this, I am sorry. No one ought to. Frightening and haunting to mind. Well... great write... it grabbed me right away...
Jodi |
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