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A Dream Come True
Contributed by
sride686
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:42:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A Dream Come True
She looks at me and I look so shy
I never dreamed I’d be her guy
The guy shed be with for all her life
And that she’ll one day be my wife
She looks in my eyes as she kisses my lips
And I’m lost in this love of eternal bliss
For a love like this could never go wrong
So let this love grow forever strong
And forever I’ll be lost in your arms
For in your arms I’ll care for you
And cherish this love I share for you
So hold me close and don’t let me go
So this love for you will forever show
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-05-10 04:42:58]
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:40:49 AM AEST
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wow this was a very good poem i love it
i used to have that but now its gone i lost my ex he died he drowned.. when you have a love like that its something to cherish for the
rest of your life and never take it for granted..
i sure did love this poem. Great Writing.:) |
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:20:35 AM AEST
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breath takingly beautiful. You capture the essence of true love so well in ur poem , Steve. A divine master piece captured so well. Remarkable and absolutely flawless.
Keep 'em coming dear friend.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:22:22 AM AEST
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Awwww that is si beautiful and sweet.i am sure she will love it.lol how could she not.
anyways awsome wrtie. |
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:30:49 PM AEST
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| very sweet thoughts and so well put together. I applaud your talent very much. I'm not that big on love poems, but your writing makes them very enjoyable and thought provoking. keep em coming and thanks. dw |
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:50:38 PM AEST
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| Such passion in your words.. happieness is well earned my friend.. keep up the good work. take care |
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:10:49 PM AEST
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Bravo... Very Very Very Beautiful...
feelings are so powerful .. as usually a wonderful
write..In life you meet thousands of people,
but only a few can touch your heart as you do through your writing...
I'll be watchin for more from you
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: A Dream Come True
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:23:13 PM AEST
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A beautiful testiment 2 love steve wish u the best . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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