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Missing
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:02:17 AM in AEST
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There was a moment
I sometimes remember
when pain was a stranger
and love wasn't danger,
the memory fades
here comes trouble again
I just can't escape.
Trying to do right
is so hard when all I see
is demons laughing
as they bring new despair,
no one seems to care
endless is the assault
and the wreckage is everywhere.
Wake up lonely in the morning
roll a cigarette
look into the mirror
see that something's missing....
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2005-05-10 03:02:17]
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Re: Missing
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by tres_estrellas on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:51:44 AM AEST
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| Yeah, I liked it. :P |
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Re: Missing
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:43:04 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. |
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Re: Missing
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:39:30 AM AEST
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I like it as well, sw. There's a.... mood, I guess... that comes along with this. It's sort of quiet, but quite potent.
Well done -
~Snemmy~ |
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