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GLASS BOX
Contributed by
Onslaught
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:43:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I wish I could live
In a glass box
Far up high
In the sky
Above the city streets
I would sleep
During the day
And I would
Look down at night
No longer confined
By the limits of my horizontal vision
Now with a perspective
Of the things around me
I would see all the lights
The skyscrapers reaching out
The glimmering commotion of life
The world beneath me
Inspiration finally illuminating my mind
I wish I could live
In a glass box
Far up high
In the sky
Above the city streets
I would sleep
During the day
And I would
Look down at night
No longer surrounded
By the barricades
That hinder my horizontal vision
I would sleep
During the day
And I would
Look down at night
No longer confined
By the limits of my horizontal vision
Now with a perspective
Of the things around me
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Onslaught
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Re: GLASS BOX
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by tres_estrellas on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:55:04 AM AEST
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| Wow, thats nice. Now I feel the same :P |
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Re: GLASS BOX
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:47:44 AM AEST
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| nice poem i like it:) |
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Re: GLASS BOX
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:19:14 AM AEST
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This is a well written and insightful poem. I enjoyed reading it !!
Leia |
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Re: GLASS BOX
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:24:33 AM AEST
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Interesting poem
It's imaginative within itself
Great Write
~Dawn |
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Re: GLASS BOX
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:45:41 AM AEST
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| Good poem. A glass box has one problem every one can look in at you. |
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Re: GLASS BOX
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by inoc on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:16:35 AM AEST
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A glass box poem is a great idea....how splendid would everything look ...and if anyone is lookin at you hey....doesn't matter what a brilliant site we would have ...your imagination is not barricaded...well done
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