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Very Gone
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Some days are so very sad
You were the best I ever had
the days are so unfull of song
And some of the nights so
very long.
All I have now are many memories
they seem to echo of stormy seas
I turn around expecting you
And I am reminded I am
very blue.
Life goes on just like "they" say
Who are these people anyway ?
Now in the clouds of Heaven are you
And the day you left is the
very one I rue.
It is optional if I will feel
Alive again for life to steal
Away my broken shattered dreams
the very ones we shared together
very ours.
I sometimes think I will never see
the sunshine like your eyes shined for me
my heart is melting at my life so long
My love you are not here you are
very gone.
may92'
Copyright © ladyfawn 2001
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2002-12-29 05:30:00]
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Re: Very Gone
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:08:43 AM AEST
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Very sad but very touching!
I see it was written in 1992.
Sure hope it's better now even tho we never forget!
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy |
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Re: Very Gone
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by wordsy on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:17:28 AM AEST
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A soulful rendering., woven in the sorrows of a broken heart.
A very nice read.
wordsy. |
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Re: Very Gone
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by spooky on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 10:00:05 AM AEST
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| it was something written from the heart,,no matter how long ago,,,beautifully written,,thank you,,my friend in words |
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Re: Very Gone
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 11:16:37 AM AEST
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Awwww Ness...This is so sad.. Hold on to the good memories...
Luv and Hugs,
Jenni.. (woof).. |
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Re: Very Gone
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 01:46:13 PM AEST
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| This was very sweet.you are very talented.Great write. |
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Re: Very Gone
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by princesspurty on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 04:08:49 PM AEST
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| very sad, but a great poem! |
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Re: Very Gone
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:27:12 PM AEST
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| very good crying too hard to type what i want |
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Re: Very Gone
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:51:20 PM AEST
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| Awwww, Nessa, what a sad write. My heart goes out to you my dear friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Very Gone
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by colinb on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 04:18:50 PM AEST
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just dont know what to say very powerful
hold on to the great memories Nessa |
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