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Mistreated Love
Contributed by
Chanti
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
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You told me you loved me. I hate you.
All that you said was fake,
I guess that ever trusting you,
was my only mistake,
when I looked into your eyes i crumbled,
at the sweetnes in your very glance,
but now i sadly realize,
you didnt want a romance,
you used me, and you tossed me,
like I was nothing at all,
you barely ever hugged me,
youd never visit, never call,
even though i say i hate you,
i still want you back so much,
i miss the way you looked at me,
your smile, and your touch,
but as i mend my tears,
and others warm my heart of your frost,
i now begin to see,
it was really you who lost.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2002-12-29 01:00:00]
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Re: Mistreated Love
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:22:19 AM AEST
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Hi Chanti,
You have harnessed your thoughts on this subject very well.
Good rythym and flow. Hope your pain soon abates.
And yes it looks like this person was the loser.
A good write |
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Re: Mistreated Love
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:26:57 AM AEST
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Hi Chanti,
You have harnessed your thoughts on this subject very well.
Good rythym and flow. Hope your pain soon abates.
And yes it looks like this person was the loser.
A good write |
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Re: Mistreated Love
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:34:24 AM AEST
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Wowzers, this hit me deeply. I liked it a lot... wow... I can relate to it a lot
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Mistreated Love
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by OreO on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:17:47 AM AEST
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I know what this feels like and you know i normally would cut it down and say how badly i was done and hurt and rah rah rah.......but im a forgiving person and i see why the one who did this to me did it....and i know why he did it....and all i can do now is thank him and say i wish you well because i do.....that's all i wish him is happiness in life....and i feel good in my heart for being this way with him because it's what came from my heart...this hit home with me deeply thank you Chanti...for sharing it...
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Re: Mistreated Love
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 08:35:06 AM AEST
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I related to this very well Chanti,
You've just about summed it all up here, well done with very good writing.
I'm pleased you have friends and family to help you with the worst confusing pain in this life.
With love
Dean:-) |
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