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Unborn Dove Rainbows
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Oh, Unborn child, did you ever know
These arms held so much love for you
~Why did you have to go?~
My heart and soul in you, is still entwined
And revolves around you, in endless time.
You are now a rainbow as I look above
Though look next to you; your not alone my Dove
I knew you deep inside me, with all my heart
Did not know before we met, we would part.
There is some comfort in the knowing
Although sweet stories we can't be sharing
You are no longer there alone anymore
I wait here and will someday open that door.
Little Darling let me tell you why it is I cry
Our family is apart; you & your daddy in the sky
And yet there were the little Unborn Twins-
No time for balls, soccer games, diaper pins..
Halfway incubated to seeing teddy bears
The ultrasound 'picture show' was bare-
Little piles quietly lying on the bottom
Only pictures ever of you & still I've got 'em.
All of you together now, my lost loves
On a Rainbow soaring with an Eagle-
~My three little Doves~
So Kids, now you know when you look down
Moms looking for Rainbows from Earths ground.
~in tune of kids jumping ropes~:
"Coulda been! Woulda been! Shoulda been 6!
Let's All Go Now; We'll play 'Pick-up Sticks' !
Look Mom We're high up at Rainbows Gate!
Shoulda been! Woulda been!; Someday be 8!"
Copyright © ladyfawn 4/21/2002
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ladyfawn
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:29:57 AM AEST
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Oh my God!'
ladyfawn this tore my heart out, how much pain can one person carry. but thank you so much for sharing this.
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by OreO on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:42:28 AM AEST
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This one hit home with me as i have lost 2 children of my own....how deep that pain is that never leaves...may peace lay upon your soul...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:10:21 AM AEST
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Hi Ladyfawn,
This is so sad and so beautifull at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!
I lost a set of twins before they were born way back when. Never knew if the were boys or girls or both. I can relate to the loss of twins.
I'm so sorry even tho it's been awhile.
Take care.
LUV, PEACE, HEALING,
emy |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:21:02 AM AEST
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| I thank you from the bottom of my heart; this is the hardest poem I ever wrote and still i cry and wish they were here.. your loving comments have wrapped a blanket around my pain for tonight..love and huggs and beauty in your lifes now and always Nessa |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by wordsy on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:26:00 AM AEST
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Although words can never fully express the feelings of a child lost, I feel that you have captured the sorrow and put forth the sadness very well. My heart truly aches for your loss, and I send along my (((HUGS)))
with hopes to bring you cheer.
wordsy. |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:37:28 AM AEST
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Oh Sweetie....(((((((hugs)))))))) I can relate to this also.... It's a pain that never goes away... but we have to learn to live with it as best we can... This was beautifully written... Wish my arms could reach across the screen right now..
Love always,
Jenni |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 12:42:33 PM AEST
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Thank you ALL from the very depths of my heart for your comments on this; the hardest one I have ever written, it makes me cry when I read it; it is the only one I've written that consistently tears me apart again and again.. I thank you so much !
love and huggs,
always Nessa |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 01:32:28 AM AEST
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As we sit together,though across the miles
In silence we remember,in silence we smile
For all they were then,and all they are now
They shine from above and touch us somehow
For every sunrise and each starlit sky
We often think back and silently cry
Yet as we are weeping,we're suddenly aware
We had but a moment,but that moment we shared
Their breath still remains,their souls in our hearts
So together we're one,though miles apart...
i dont usually leave a poem in feedback but I just had to properly say what was in my heart after reading your poem...Its...absolutely beautiful! (((huggers)))
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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| I have goosebumps from the my feet to my hairline. The title was one of the best I have ever seen. This is a masterpiece and I have to tell you that if someone could reach in and break my heart you have done it. Moving beyond mere words I could ever type to you. Please think about resubmitting this because there are sooooooooooo many new people. I don't think i've ever been so moved in my life. ((Hugs)) Kie |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:15:31 PM AEST
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| Oh my God Nessa, This was so sad. My heart feels for you my dear friend. I am so sorry for all of your losses. I can imagine how difficult it would have been for you to write this. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Unborn Dove Rainbows
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:49:01 PM AEST
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| amazing piece of poetry, nessa. you had brilliance written with the first word until the last. |
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