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-White-
Contributed by
PsychoScissors
on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:06:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As you spiral down,
can you can see the stars above you?
Would you think it strange,
if we spun counter clockwise?
The sun sets upwards and never comes down
and I type the quickest with clouds behind my curser..
Lulled to sleep by chimes
I remember vaguely like blurry water
as your hand pulls away,
Floundering I catch you smiling
the same as before you left
I missed the smile you had while watching me drown
One day I'll swim back up to the top
and smile down at you
as you gasp and spin and laugh and sink...
I hope the world will spin counter clockwise for one day
and everything will move to push through...
Copyright ©
PsychoScissors
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2005-05-09 19:06:14]
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Re: -White-
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 04:06:41 PM AEST
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misery loves company - but I've never understood that comment. Yet it seems to make sense here in regards to your write. sometimes a good purge helps to ease it along. a sharp pointed stick this is, to jab the offender. 'twould be nice to see the offenders in life go OWW!
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