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No Ordinary Miracle...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The sky painted like cotton candy
The meadows lush so ever green
Beauty before me unfolds
Abundant bounties on earth to be seen
Beautiful purple Star Gazers
Sway in the mid afternoon shade
Dancing softly amidst the breeze
Their wholesome beauty on parade
It's no ordinary miracle
You made your way into my life
I wanted so much to die
With the sharp blades of a knife
I often prayed to God
Just before going to sleep
My heartache and pain
Bore at my heart so deep
Nightfall fills the sky
Over the rugged terrain
As heaven opens its doors
Down comes the rain
You see it's no ordinary miracle
I have you here with me now
It's a heavenly miracle
You made your way to me somehow
When you think all is lost and gone
Pray everynight for ur prayers may be heard
For It's no ordinary miracle
My prayers were answered word for word
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:37:54 PM AEST
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Sue dear, I'm so glad you let whomever into your heart. A warm and feeling relationship will start!
There is so much power in prayer. The answer is not always what we want to hear. But you can be sure, if he loved us enough to give his son, then he is going to hear, and then decide for you what is best.
This is a lovely poem, the terminology is out of this world.......you write poetry to open everyone's "mind's eye!" I could see every description clearly and very vividly.........wonderful work, and enjoyable to all
Warm Love
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:38:21 PM AEST
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Sue, always an enchanting delight with your poetry. Beautiful, great flow, a miracle indeed! May this love and happiness last a lifetime for you, cheri. You deserve it. Exquisite piece of poetic art. Tip my hat to this one. Thanks so much for sharing your newfound love! All my love. Forever,
Your friend/fan,
Stephy! *hugs* |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 05:42:01 PM AEST
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Love it..Leaves a precious feelin in my heart ty
A gracious outlook on life through prayers
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:00:04 PM AEST
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such a beautiful poem filled with hope and promise happy dreams 2 u my friend . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 07:49:51 PM AEST
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| Very well-worded. This tugged at my heart strings...Scorp. |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by dvsnme816 on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:42:23 PM AEST
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You are the Oprah of poetry!!! Very special poem to my heart, babe. I read each one of your poems at least 2 times...I like the dramatic change you took for love. I knew that something made you smile, and the feelings show like the teeth you bare to be happy(or something like that).
I like every poem you write no matter what they are about ;). I hope to hear more of those special poems from you because I tingle inside like goosebumps (or gas). It was an unforgetable moment.
XOXOXO
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:54:15 PM AEST
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That was so pretty! It melts my heart all the way to the floor,as I read more & more!! Alot of feeling ,& strong emotions,that's what makes it sound so beautiful!!! You've got so much passion,it just pours!!!! Another great one so,& of course another 5!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:40:31 AM AEST
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At the end of hope is God. If we talk to him and tell him of our needs, he will provide. Maybe not in the time frame we want, but when he knows it is the right time.
Dove |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 02:22:52 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful...it seems heaven opened its gates in a dream. best of luck. mina..;-) venkat |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 04:05:39 AM AEST
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| The warmth of your heart is never ending and is felt by all who read. You touch so many lives by the words you write. Your words are always filled with so much warmth and love and you are lucky to have this love. This poem was worded very well and was filled with so much vivid pictures of your love in your life. Take care my good friend Sue and thank you for sharing yet another beautiful work of art that touched my heart. Your friend….Steve |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:32:15 PM AEST
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| wonderfully done sue |
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Re: No Ordinary Miracle...
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:41:50 AM AEST
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truely beautiful, i am so happy for you my friend, may all your dreams ever come true:) hugs n' love nessa
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